Write your story from the first perspective i.e. “I did this” and not “John did this…”
Make the story personable – you can write about your qualifications, but so can many other people, what makes you unique? Tell a story about yourself that would make you stand out.
REALTORS : Local involvement goes a long way – for example if you were born and raised in this location or if you go to church here, or are a member of any charities or other local groups.